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1. Sample
The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Introduction
The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Paraphrase:
- The diagram -> The given diagram
- Shows -> Illustrates
- The process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry
-> different stages in the production of bricks for the building industries
* Useful phrases:
- The production of…
- The process of producing/making…
- ..is produced/made
- How to produce/make…
Full introduction:
The given diagram expresses different stages in the production of bricks for the building industries.
2. Overview
- How many stages in this process? 7 stages
- Start with? Digging the clay
- Finish with? Packing and delivering the brick
Useful structure
- There are …….. main steps/ stages in …
- The …… involves … main stesp/ stages beginning/starting with … and finishing with …
- Overview:
In general, brick production involves 7 steps, starting from the digging stages and ending at the delivery stage.
3. Body
- Thorougly and properly pick the figures along with accurate vocabularies
Useful structure:
- The first/second/last… step
- At the same time/ Simultaneously
- To begin with/First of all
As can be seen, the first step of brick manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger. This clay is then filtered and processed in a roller machine and then mixed with sand and water. In the third stage, the mixture is either kept in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to make the raw shape of the bricks. In the next step, the shaped raw bricks are dried for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven.
After that, the dried raw bricks are kept in a kiln, both in moderate and high temperature, up to 1300 degree centigrade and then placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours. This process makes the brick to be packed and delivered in the final two steps. The delivery process is the final process of brick manufacturing and as it is noted, brick making is a moderately complex process that requires some predefined works to make it usable.
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