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Luyện thi ilets writing for beginner – writing task 1 pie chart

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Bài học luyện thi ilets writing Task 1 hôm nay chúng ta tìm hiểu về dạng bài Pie Chart nhé. Đây là một trong những dạng bài hay gặp trong Writing nhất.

Sample

The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words. (nguồn ielts-exam.net).

Introduction 

The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Paraphrase:

  • The chart -> The pie charts
  • Shows ->  Illustrate
  • The results of a survey -> The outcome of a survey
  • What people of different age groups say makes them most happy

-> Factors contributing to a happy life from the different aged groups

  • Full introduction:

The pie chart illustrates the outcome of a survey conducted to find out factors contributing to a happy life from the different aged groups

Overview

  • Give the noticeable features between the two chart
  • Overall, charts show Achievement at work sector has the highest proportion of happiness in the both age groups. Besides, people who just under 30 feels happy if they can travel and have a good looking while people who over 30 tend to satisfy with their life when they gather with their family and have financial security.

Body

Body 1:

– What is a similarity between two chartsAchievement at work

– How much does it account for in each? 31% for the younger and 32% for the older

SimilarityLook at the similarities,A and B share the same pattern,
The biggest percentageThe  biggest           data         largest     +    figure         highest          percentage                                 proportion
2 age groupsThe former and the latter groupUnder 30 – age – group and over 30 – age – groupThe younger aged group and the older aged group
  • Looking at the similarities, for both younger and older people, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them most happiness: 31% for the former group and 32% for the latter group.
  • What is the second factor that contributes the most to people’s happiness in both age groups? -> Doing hobbies
  • Doing hobbies is also a noticiable factor triggering delighted feeling for both age groups mentioned with 22% and 24%

Body 2:

  • What are the two main differences between two groups? Make comparisons where relevant
  • For younger group: Having a good appearance and travelling
  • For older group : Financial security và Being with family
Comparative languageIn contrast, On the other hand, Look at the differences,On the contrary, Contrarily, However
Neither A nor B…Neither of them…

Many younger people regard having a good appearance and travelling significantly contribute to a happy life. In details, 18% of them state being good looking is essential for happiness while 15% who state that travelling leads to a fulfilled life. On the contrary, neither of having a good appearance and travelling is mentioned by the older aged group. Instead, a fifth of older people report that having financial security is most critical to their happiness and 14% say they feel most happy when they are with their family.

Full sample

The pie chart illustrates the outcome of a survey conducted to find out factors contributing to a happy life from the different aged groups.

Look at the similarities, for both younger and older people, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them most happiness: 31% for the younger age group and 32% for the older group. Doing hobbies is also a noticiable factor triggering delighted feeling for both age groups mentioned with 22% and 24% respectively.

Turning now to the differences, many younger people regard having a good appearance as extremely important: 18% of them states this brings them most happiness. This is followed by 15% who states that travel brings them happiness.

Neither of these two factors is mentioned by older people. Instead, 20% of older people reports that having financial security is most important to their happiness and 14% says they feel most happy when they are with their family.

Các bạn lưu về luyện Writing Task 1 nhé!

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